Sunday, March 22, 2015

Hummingbirds Short Story

While I am in the process of writing the other part of this series, Forrest suggested for me to post the first 'installment' on here.  What a great idea!  Thank you for thinking for me, Forrest!

* Just a note to everyone:  This is a fictional story.  Hope you enjoy!  (Also, I may change the last paragraph to fit the series later on).

Hummingbirds

By: Jesse McKenzie Jr.

            Mother Nature is gleaming today.  The vibrant colors flow harmoniously; the rainbow is encircling the mountain.   The trees are back to life and the grass full with patches of blooms reaching for the heavens.  Birds sing praise of the new beginning.  Deer, moose, and bears roam freely through the dense forests and feed upon the bounty.   Spring returns and what a welcome it is after a brutal, long winter.  The melting snow is heard rushing along the slopes and finding their way to new ground.  Life has returned once again.
            Ethan is inhaling the fresh air, as if it was the first time, and closes his eyes to completely consume the surroundings.  A blaring horn wakes him from his nature meditation.  For a moment, this slim, average height, 29 year old man experienced life and all of its gifts.  But that moment has passed, and he is reminded of the convenience store on the busy rural route – the only one for miles – he just exited.  The smell of gasoline returns to his nostrils and makes him appreciate nature even more.  Ethan takes a breath; trying to recapture the forbidden essences.  Unable to, he walks back to his brand new Camaro, and drives off. 
He is traveling to see his grandmother, Ellie, which he has not seen in many months, mostly because of the weather and where she lives.  It is not a simple drive, nor is it a comfortable one.  The only road to her house is not supported by the city; therefore, it is not maintained as properly as it should be.  The dirt is loose on dry days, but springtime and winter wreak havoc on the flatness.  Once a year – if the city is feeling generous – a truck will take a quick sweep and grate it, which sometimes only makes it worse.  After a rainfall, the road will shake a vehicle violently; slower speed increases the roughness on the car and occupants.  Though, speeding is not recommended either.  First, it is law to remain around the noted limit, and second, it is wise to take caution in the countryside.  Wild animals can leap out of the forest’s tree line, which is almost on the narrow road on either side, at any given time.  The other reason is because his time is consumed on work and school. 
His excitement to see Ellie is impossible to contain.  The smile is permanently fixed on his lips as he drives on the paved road; the last portion of pavement before the horrendous road ahead.  Ellie has not refrained from telling every person that Ethan is her favorite, including family members, since his birth.  They have always had a special bond; a natural bond that no one can discourage or remove.  The absence has only strengthened their connection, but he wishes he could see her more often.  All he can do is promise himself that he will visit more frequently after graduation and secure a decent job. 
His thoughts are rudely interrupted when the car’s tires strike the country road.  He slows down enough to avoid the vicious, unforgiving road.  He cannot contain the thoughts as he drives on the endless path.  He begins to think about other people’s views about this torturous road, and how he has heard people say that they have ran off the road into the close ditch, an animal jumped out in front of them without any time to react, or the fact that the road is not pleasant.  All negative things, he thinks.  How could they all think of it like that?  How could something so beautiful and magnificent be so demonized?  Yes, the road is not the best, but all he could think of was that his destination was more important than bumps in the road. 
Ethan realized he was coming up on a corner that needed every ounce of his attention.  The corner was sharp and barely enough room for one car, so he had to be extra cautious.  Though he could not help but think of how close he was to Ellie’s now.  Just a couple more miles and he would turn another corner, and then the log cabin would be visible.  His thoughts are racing, but he wanted to arrive in one piece.  He had to commit full awareness to the road.  He was almost there!
The final mile was the most difficult, and most boring.  Either side of the road consisted of small corn fields.  Nothing to look at but corn stalks.  During this time of year it is even more tedious because the corn seeds have not been planted yet.  Fresh weeds cover much of the fields, for now, that is, until the farmer tills it again.  The beauty still surrounds the edges of the corn fields, “Maybe the farmer wanted to retain the natural beauty while having the ability to plant,” Ethan thought.
The last corner was rapidly approaching, and then he would be able to see the log cabin.  His grandparents built it just after they were married.  Ellie’s father owned a lumber mill, which he provided the wood for the young couple’s house.  All they had to do was buy the land.  They saved for many years prior, and with good fortune and cheap land rates at the time, were able to obtain a vast amount of acres just below a mountain in New Hampshire.  Their backyard was the slope of the mountain; a breathtaking scene.  They both fell in love with the area, even though it was miles outside of any town.  However, the neighbors were few and far in between; the closest one living two miles away.  They wanted privacy and they definitely achieved that goal.
Unfortunately, Ethan’s grandfather, William, passed away a decade previously, so he was not privileged with his presence any longer.  Ellie refused to give up the house or the land because she has lived there for almost a half a century, and the memories of her husband and their offspring’s’ childhood remained.  A mother cannot let go of something easily when it involves the people she loves the most. 
The house did need some work and her two boys, now men, did all they could to help out.  The things they could not help with, such as plumbing and electrical, they helped by paying a professional to come to the house and fix it for her.  She lived in a small town – everyone knows each other, and they know all the gossip – and many times the professionals would only charge half price because they know Ellie and they knew and respected William.  Nonetheless, the house was superb.  Five bedrooms, moderate in size, one for each child and one for Ellie and William; one large living room, which housed the massive television and wall unit along with the furniture and decor; one average sized bathroom, covered in blue and white tiles with a marble floor and white fixtures; and an enormous kitchen, which contained two large mammoth windows facing the driveway.  Ellie would sit at the table in front of the windows and stare out the window for hours while playing cards – mostly solitaire – when she was not cooking or cleaning.  “She did most of her thinking and reminiscing looking out that window,” Ethan thought as he recalled watching her in previous visits. 
“Finally!” he exclaimed loudly as he turned the corner viewing the house.  He had arrived.  The driveway was pretty long considering it was at the base of a mountain, slightly sloping uphill; following the motion of the landscape.  The driveway is like most of the trip, rough and bumpy because it is not paved, instead of dirt though, it is gravel, which is better than the dirt during the wet season. 
Grammy, as Ethan called her, was waving at the kitchen window, and just as he shut the car door she was opening the front door to greet him.  He always laughed to himself when he saw her.  She is a stout woman of 79, and Irish heritage that were clearly visible by the flames upon her head.  A sweet, caring woman but do not cross her or get on her bad side in any fashion.  She might be gentle and extend her heart, but once offended or maddened and her voice deepens to a stern discipline.  Ellie is not a violent person; though, her children would run when they tested her limits.  Her slap across the face, when provoked, would leave an emotional scar, but trained the person to think twice the next time.  She never hit or used the stern voice with Ethan because she did not need to – he respected her and demonstrated that respect – and because he is her favorite. 
She held out her arms, her smile as big as the mountain in the background, and she pulled Ethan in close.  The hug lasted about a minute, but to the both of them it lasted a lifetime.  Her first born grandson had returned.  Some say that is the reason for her favoritism toward Ethan, he was the first born male from her eldest male child.  The reason did not matter to Ethan.  He loved her just as much because in secret she was his favorite grandparent.  She always had dessert or freshly cooked food waiting for him when he arrived, and this day was no different.  He could smell the apple pie aroma flowing out the window and through the air, as if the fragrance was meant for his nose only.  Ellie, the smell of the pie, and the scenery struck him in the heart; he was once again home.
Ellie and Ethan went inside to the kitchen and sat at the table.  She usually waited a few minutes before offering the ‘surprise food’, so he could relax from the long trip from halfway across state.  They expressed the delayed time between visits, but were grateful the chance had arrived and life had permitted the visit.  Ethan told Ellie about his accomplishments and daily routines first, and then it was Ellie’s turn.  While talking Ellie stood up and brought the pie to the table.  Ethan closed his eyes and inhaled the scent of apples; cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter fill his insides.  His body felt the warm cooking life fill his heart.  She cut him a piece, as well as one for her, and sat back down while they enjoyed the scenery, pie, and each other’s company.
Ellie pushed her plate to one side and asked while she pointed out the window, “Do you know what kind of birdfeeder that is, Ethan?”
“I believe it is a hummingbird feeder, Grammy, correct?”
“Yes.  Do you know why I have so many hanging from that tree and the edge of the house?”
“No, why do you?”
“Hummingbirds are my favorite bird.  They are colorful and light as a feather.  They fly around in such grace.  I would love for once to have one land on my palm.  They are such beautiful creatures.  Free and wild at the same time,” she said in a low, calm voice as she dreamed out the window.  “I sit and watch them all day long, or so it seems sometimes.”
“They are precious, Grammy.”
She said nothing more for a few minutes, just dazed out the window watching those small birds come and go, while she smiled.  Suddenly, her expression changed to sadness; a worrisome look overcame her lovely face.  Her eyes drooped, and her eyes closed. 
“Grammy, are you alright?” 
“Ethan, there is something I have to tell you.  It is something you are not going to like, but I want you to listen to me and understand,” she softly demanded and hoped.
“Of course, Grammy, whatever it is.”
Looking at him and forcing a smile she continues, “I was having pains in my abdominal area.  The pain was too unbearable to ignore, so I finally, after a while of procrastinating, went to the doctor.  They ran some tests and I have the results that I know you will not fully accept.”
“Grammy, what did he find?” asked Ethan.  The intense conversation is stiffening his muscles and brain and panic filling his heart. 
She paused and looked out the window again as tears welled up in her eyes.  Without looking back at her grandson – refusing to see his desperation – her eyes lingered outside the window.  “He thought it might be one of my kidneys, so they did an ultrasound.  The right side was fine, but the left,” she paused to collect herself because she did not want to lose control of her sadness in front of him.  Ethan always saw her as a strong individual.  One that could handle any obstacle that faced her.  She has been through so much already; the loss of her true love and two cases of cancer: both times breast cancer.  After a few moments, she began again where she left off, “The left kidney could not be found.”
Puzzled, Ethan asked, “What do you mean it could not be found?  Did you have it removed when you were younger?”
“No, and what I mean is they could not see it.  It was there, but it was hidden.  The cancer had completely covered it.”
Devastation filled Ethan’s entire body, not just his heart this time.  He wanted to fall to the floor in defeat, but he could not react this way in front of Grammy.  Besides, she had conquered cancer twice before.  She is a tough woman, and she will conquer it again.  “What are your options?  What did the doctor say can be done?  Is there a treatment available?”
“Hold on, Ethan.  I am not done,” she insisted looking back at him.
“Sorry.”
She forced another smile to let him know she accepted and understood.  “The doctor told me of two options, but I have come to a decision.”
“Okay,” Ethan stated while listening carefully.
“I have been through the treatment twice before.  My body and mind are not willing to go through that experience anymore.  I have given this a lot of thought and I am refusing the treatment.”
Ethan sank in the chair, his heart crashed through the floor, and despair entered without an invitation.  His eyes felt pain as he sat there listening to her situation.  He tried with all his might to suppress the emotions, but the pain was more forceful than anything he had witnessed before.  He wanted to bust out in a crying rage, but he knew that was not the time.  He had to be strong for Grammy.  He had to listen.
“I have known the diagnosis for a couple months.  I did not want to tell you over the phone and I did not want to give you a notion that something was wrong.  I did not want you to travel with the questions taking over your mind, and hinder your concentration on that long drive.  I knew that calling you and inviting you here out of the blue would be enough for you to know that I wanted to see you,” Ellie explained.
The only words Ethan could pour out of his mouth without sobbing or show his anger toward life were, “Thank you.”
She nodded her head and looked out the window for a second, and then back at Ethan.  “I have lived a marvelous life, Ethan.  I found and married my true love, had four wonderful children, and multiple grandchildren.  It is not a secret that you are my favorite grandchild.  Do you know why you are my favorite?”
Fighting the tears with every ounce of energy Ethan had left, he answered, “Not really, Grammy.  I assume, and heard, it was because I was the first male grandchild born.”
She smiled and responded, “That is part of the reason, yes.  There is another reason though.  When I first met you after you were brought into this world, I saw goodness in you that I knew would last a lifetime.  You were innocent and fragile.  Somehow I knew that would always stay inside you, would grow from that, learn from it, and be special.”
Ethan’s ability to hide his emotions diminished after hearing what his grandmother expressed.  He bowed his head and the tears flooded his cheeks.  He was not sobbing, but the tears would not stop.  The damn had broken and nothing was going to stop the flow.  He just sat there with his head bowed and let the tears run like a faucet down his pale cheeks. 
Ellie watched out the window as she tried to focus on the hummingbirds to prevent her from the same reaction.  She knew he had to allow the emotion to free itself because it would do no good keeping it inside; festering. 
Minutes passed before Ethan regained control.  Wiping his eyes with a tissue, he said, “I love you, Grammy.”
The only thing she could do was stand up, walk over, and hug him for comfort.  Not only to comfort him, but to comfort her as well.  They both needed a hug at this point.  The information was overwhelming. 
After a few minutes, she went back to the other side of the table where she was sitting before.  The both stared out the window focusing on the tiny hummingbirds floating on air just outside the feeders.  Then, without warning, Ellie stood up and walked into her bedroom, which was down the long hallway.  Upon returning, she held a book in her hand and handed it to Ethan.
“Open to page 7.  There you will find more information than I could give you about my father.  I can tell you about him as a father, but that chapter describes him as a businessman,” she informed.
Ethan took the book in his hands and opened up to the page.  It described Fred – Ethan’s great grandfather – as a wise man of business.  He owned a lumber mill and a paper factory, which his grandfather built with his bare hands, and has passed through the generations of the family.  However, halfway through Fred’s life, the economy and times had changed.  Both the lumber mill and the paper factory closed.  There were more pages about Fred, but Ethan’s mind was preoccupied with Grammy.  “Grammy, why,” Ethan started to ask then composed himself and continued, “Why have you not told anyone before now?  Why did you choose me?”
“You are the only one in the family who is going to know about the personal aspects of your other family; my side.  I have not discussed it with any other.  I have heard others assuming my family is evil because of not discussing it.  They think I do not talk about my family because there is something to hide; something I do not wish to remember.  That is not true.  I have always held my family close to my heart.  They are sacred to me, as you are.  Until now, I have not wanted to share it with anyone.  I choose to share it with you.  I want you to know where you come from, how special you truly are, and how much you mean to me. You are very smart, even though you do not realize how smart you are.  You are in school for English.  Whatever you choose to do with the information is up to you.  I do not want the secrecy anymore.  You come from a good, smart, and loving family that I wish you had the chance to meet.  Both my parents died before you were old enough to remember them.  My mother, Louise, was strict but she did everything she could for us.  Whenever we needed clothes, she would sew them; she was frugal and used every opportunity to save as much as she could.  It helped in later years when the factory and mill closed.  My father was a respected man in town.  He helped any who needed it.  If he could not help financially, he would help as best he could in other ways.  My brother, well, he was as much a handful as I was.  We tried mother’s patience more times than I care to admit.  However, my brother and I never got into trouble with the law.  We were troublemakers, but not law breakers.  We were good kids for the most part.”
Ethan tried to remember each and every detail she told him that day.  She told him all about the family and the legacy they left, or tried to leave to the future family members.  The closing of the mill and factory was not a positive occurrence to leave for the future, but it did last four generations.  Some may think it is a failure, but Ethan always thought of it as a triumph.  During his research, he discovered that his family succeeded long after other mills and factories sealed their doors.  The legacy lives on in the historical society museum.  No person could be more proud of his heritage. 
The following year, Grammy passed away, but Ethan spent as much time as he could with her during that final year.  Listening to her stories, watching out the window at the hummingbirds, and laughing any chance they could.  It was difficult toward the end because she was on morphine and was not coherent most of the time.  Ethan saw a different side of her that he never thought possible, but he still remembers her as the resilient, fun, loving grandmother he had always admired. 

That year changed his life.  He had a new found respect for a family he never knew.  He acted upon Grammy’s wishes pertaining to her family information.  He wrote a book detailing each event, success, and each failure.  The last chapter focused on the inspiration for the book; Grammy and the hummingbirds.

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